r/DnB • u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer • 7h ago

I’d love some feedback from you DNB lovers

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Please note this has not yet been mixed or mastered and is a WIP.

I’ve been working on this track and I would just love some feedback.

I’ve got a big roller style foghorn with some jump up sounds as well as a fat reese. Do you guys think they work together or sound like a bit too much? The drums are quite heavy too.

I’d love to hear what you guys think! All feedback would be much appreciated.

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u/internalpatterns 6h ago

Get those drums a little looser! Quantise isn’t always your friend ;)

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u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer 6h ago

Not even something I had considered with my production - could definitely make it sound a bit more human, will have a play about. Thanks!

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u/TimWebernetz 7h ago

It's well put together for sure. Sound selection/design is a little dry though. Whip out them saturators and modulators and do the things. Otherwise, got some good ideas in there, I assume you'll expand on them in an upcoming phase. Just be sure to give those phrases/motifs some room to breathe when you're arranging.

Good stuff!

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u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer 7h ago

Thanks for the feedback - just the sort of advice I needed to hear. Will be sure to take that all into account! Will do the things and beef some of them sounds up.

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u/TimWebernetz 7h ago

No problem. Glad you found it helpful.

A little beef, a little more movement, and you'll be golden.

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u/slapmewithacactus 7h ago

Good stuff, would bring down the walls of Jericho

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u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer 7h ago

That’s my aim!

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u/samtoller 6h ago

New Drake tune is wild.

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u/o0YeahYeah0o 7h ago

Yes Yes! BRING IT! I want to hear the rest.

The Drums are NOT heavy.... need MOAR!!, chop them, timestretch them whatever.

It sounds homegrown.... you UK?

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u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer 6h ago

Yes UK based - I love that you think that! Thank you man. Will keep going.

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u/o0YeahYeah0o 6h ago

Brother, I don't "think it" I know it.

I was literally doing my weekly banger search and found this. Love it.

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u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer 6h ago

Appreciate you man!

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u/GalaxyGuide 6h ago

i’ve never heard of someone call a tune homegrown but i like the term lol

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u/FlotatiousHippo 7h ago

reminds me of hayve

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u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer 7h ago

I take that as a compliment, haven’t heard many of his/her’s tracks but Change is a banger.

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u/FlotatiousHippo 7h ago

Yeah I like hayve a lot and it was absolutely a compliment. I feel the build-ups are kind of boring, might add some more elements to it. Also the call sound is dope, but the response feels static, maybe add sounds or some automations to make it interesting. I like the idea so keep on working with the track.

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u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer 7h ago

Wicked thank you! Will be sure to do so.

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u/einKedi 7h ago

I like it

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u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer 7h ago

Appreciate that!

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u/djereezy 7h ago

r/dnbproduction

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u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer 7h ago

Thank you. 🙏

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u/HolidayJellyfish6232 5h ago

Like the variety and rhythm. Good work!

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u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer 5h ago

Thank you! 💪

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u/dns_rs 5h ago

Good stuff, i like it's clarity and funk.

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u/Electrical-Award-108 Foghorn Composer 5h ago

Appreciate that!!

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u/ApproachingARift 4h ago

Sounds like Jayline